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Hey kid,
I understand the world has gotten to your head
Sometimes you feel as if there is no escaping
Stop trying to escape, just adapt and make something beautiful
out of a horrifying tragedy.
Hey soldier,
They said they were going to free you
Give you back to your family and let you put down your gun
I know they didn't keep their promise
But don't stop trying until your heart stops beating
Because your family needs you more than your country ever did.
Hey world,
Want a bandaid?
I understand the world has gotten to your head
Sometimes you feel as if there is no escaping
Stop trying to escape, just adapt and make something beautiful
out of a horrifying tragedy.
Hey soldier,
They said they were going to free you
Give you back to your family and let you put down your gun
I know they didn't keep their promise
But don't stop trying until your heart stops beating
Because your family needs you more than your country ever did.
Hey world,
Want a bandaid?
I unno.
I'm not sure if this is any good aha, comments appreciated.
I'm not sure if this is any good aha, comments appreciated.
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Nice twist and juxtaposition of the characters. its quite clever, you know.
The only thing that bothers me a bit is the use of escaping/escape so close together... if i had to suggest something different i would go with completely removing "stop trying to escape" from line four.
Thats just me tho...
The only thing that bothers me a bit is the use of escaping/escape so close together... if i had to suggest something different i would go with completely removing "stop trying to escape" from line four.
Thats just me tho...